My first track ever

[twoblack]

I am not sure if this is even remotley good but i dunno take a listen and tell me what u think...this is kinda industrial dub..

thanks
the track

 

[Isosceles_CAT]

Cool, nice chillin background music. I thought the bass got a bit out of hand as it goes on though... Nice sounding track overall...

 

[twoblack]

thanks man...the track is not mastered yet and the levels are off i need someon to do that...the bass does get distorted and many thigs do..thats why i called it "distordub"

I am soo happy that u listen to it........what other input can u give?

 

[REMI XO]

Very trippy...it nice surfin on the internet at 4am music

in terms of making the sound more appealing to the general public. I would edit it down abit aswell as add some changes.

also a VAN HELDEN a la 97ish 4x4 beat would make that track wikked

 

[DeepSix]

nicely shaped ambience.

Like the delayed chords

The beat is really subtle - I'm not used to that

This would be great soundtrack/videogame music and could definitely benefit from a dancier remix (but this version is also very good!)

 

[docta seuss]

quite nice. needs a bit more to it perhaps, but it's a nicely mellow choon.

 

[twoblack]

thanks man,

I did try to make it trippy and this beat is not for dancing per say.

U got the what i wabted to make out of this track..basically this track is for solo pleasure...listen to it by yourslef on your own...when i envisoned this track i magine the setting first as to where it would be played and then who would listen to it.

I magined this track being played at a smokey basment bar playing nice chilled dub beats smoking a massive spliff.

or surfing the net at 4am

I see where u r going with the 4/4 beat underlying the base line at the end, but i opted for a long repetitive loops because i did want to be restricted by any time limit, and i want to give every note, every loop and elemnt its due.

Further, once the listner surpasses that first shock of the length of loops and the lack of change, the listner starts to hear the hidden underlying melodies and rhythm lines hidden between the rhythm lines.

thanks for listening and thanks for the input more is welcomed

 

[docta seuss]

Originally posted by twoblack

once the listner surpasses that first shock of the length of loops and the lack of change, the listner starts to hear the hidden underlying melodies and rhythm lines hidden between the rhythm lines.

indeed, but one must remember that there are limits (not directed at this track).

i'd say it's definitely one for the 'phones.

 

[twoblack]

phones is not what i envisioned...but thats cool man

 

[twoblack]

Hey thanks DEEPSIX

Oh by the way there is no MIDI in this

My music partner came to my place and recorded some organ loops and just added tons of plugins to the audio track..i guess the only think i used was the drums.

IS THERE ANYBODY INTERESTED IN RESHAPING TIS TRACK

 

[docta seuss]

Originally posted by twoblack
phones is not what i envisioned...but thats cool man

no¿

hmmm, i'd say this is definitely what i'd call headphone music, but to each their own, right?

as long as you got peeps diggin' your choons, that's the important thing.

 

[twoblack]

Originally posted by docta seuss
quite nice. needs a bit more to it perhaps, but it's a nicely mellow choon.

You are right

I do feel somehw that there is something missing, thats why i aim putting it outthere so i can get some feedback form real discophiles such as yourslef.\\thansk again

 

[docta seuss]

Originally posted by twoblack

IS THERE ANYBODY INTERESTED IN RESHAPING TIS TRACK

i'm always up for reshaping a good tune.

 

[twoblack]

Originally posted by docta seuss
no¿

hmmm, i'd say this is definitely what i'd call headphone music, but to each their own, right?

as long as you got peeps diggin' your choons, that's the important thing.

LOL LOL LOL LOL

You know what??/ I think u have great ears cuz i made this track entirley with me headphones on..no monitor speakers...i see why you say that now...YOU ARE RIGHT MAN very much so...good one.

 

[twoblack]

Originally posted by docta seuss
i'm always up for reshaping a good tune.

pm me

 

[docta seuss]

Originally posted by twoblack
i made this track entirley with me headphones on.

for me, that's the only way to do it man. nothing beats the sound quality of a good set o' headphones.

 

[OTIS]

WOW, I like it alot.. it's like new-dub or something.. would go perfect into an ambient hybrid set...

Nice won.

 

[twoblack]

Originally posted by OTIS
WOW, I like it alot.. it's like new-dub or something.. would go perfect into an ambient hybrid set...

Nice won.

Thanks man
I hink i got the soundcard from u 2496/ in any case thanks again man
what other critique do u have?

 

[twoblack]

By the why I am trying to go a bit back and have some reggee dub elemts in there...is it noticable or did i miss the mark?

 

[twoblack]

by the way i only used two audio samples looped in cubase...my friend doing the keys and no midi

 

[DeepSix]

Originally posted by twoblack
By the why I am trying to go a bit back and have some reggee dub elemts in there...is it noticable or did i miss the mark?

It wasn't uber noticable when i listened to it.

 

[twoblack]

Originally posted by DeepSix
It wasn't uber noticable when i listened to it.

damn...thanks
any others

 

[docta seuss]

Originally posted by twoblack
By the why I am trying to go a bit back and have some reggee dub elemts in there...is it noticable or did i miss the mark?

it's slightly there now that i know to listen for it, but it doesn't jump out at you.