<font face="Verdana, Arial" size="2">Originally posted by evil homer:
tune sounds better but you're a damn fool
Roots Manuva is not in Jurassic 5, he is a solo recording artist from UK, on Big Dada (Ninja tune's hip hop label). He did a tune with Chali 2na (of Jurassic 5 fame) on his latest LP, thats where you got the sample from i think (cuz you recorded it from me and cuz the vocal doesn't sound jamaica/british).
Either way your tune sounds a lot better except i don't really like the female vocal bit, it sounds too far back in the mix, but i think it'd be better if you just scrapped that bit. The twisting noise from the beginning is great, you tweaked that out well. The bassline sounds too repetitive or monotonous. Try fucking around with some LFO's maybe or some sweeping filters. Try and make it so that the filter 'comes full circle' every 64 bars or so, real slow so that theres a gradual change to that 'b-line'.
I like your drum pattern, try maybe adding in some more fills to compensate for the no vocal
That's what i say for now, keep us posted on progress.
ps, expect a call from some of my brothers friends about recording some things</font>